I wrote this poem, hit the end and went to bed. I thought when I read it today that I would be adding to it, but now I think it will sit a bit longer as I’m not sure I need to add anything else to it. Short, but I think it hits the point. Thoughts?
Blended into we
I close my eyes
And look deep into yours
Feel your touch
Though you’re across the room
Hear your voice
In the quite of the moon
Initial flames have settled down
Into the deep red heat of aged embers
You and me
Have blended into we
Stephen Kellogg – 2012
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Sweet poem of established love. Very nice!
Thanks for stopping by, adding me to your list of NaPoWriMo folks but especially for taking the time to comment.
i liked the title and the image of this piece in my mind… “i closed my eyes and looked deep into yours” contrasting yet powerful , i liked it 😉
short pieces never failed me haha! keep it up stephen!
That was one of those lines that just popped into my head. Not sure what triggered it but the rest came pretty easily after that.