Blended into we – Poem – NaPoWriMo Day 5

I wrote this poem, hit the end and went to bed. I thought when I read it today that I would be adding to it, but now I think it will sit a bit longer as I’m not sure I need to add anything else to it. Short, but I think it hits the point. Thoughts?

Blended into we

I close my eyes
And look deep into yours

Feel your touch
Though you’re across the room

Hear your voice
In the quite of the moon

Initial flames have settled down
Into the deep red heat of aged embers

You and me
Have blended into we


Stephen Kellogg – 2012

About Stephen Kellogg

Poetry, Ponderings, Prose, Photos & Pounding out the Pathways All at my blog... I hope you'll take a few minutes to wander around the site. Not all of what you read there will be happy or sad etc. but I trust my writings, photos etc will encourage, touch, inspire or just make you think…. I really appreciate feedback!! Thanks and enjoy Peace! Stephen Kellogg All of my writings, pictures etc are original works, unless otherwise noted, and should be considered copyrighted.
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4 Responses to Blended into we – Poem – NaPoWriMo Day 5

  1. Sweet poem of established love. Very nice!

  2. Adriene,
    Thanks for stopping by, adding me to your list of NaPoWriMo folks but especially for taking the time to comment.



  3. jymiely says:

    i liked the title and the image of this piece in my mind… “i closed my eyes and looked deep into yours” contrasting yet powerful , i liked it 😉

    short pieces never failed me haha! keep it up stephen!

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