This is a response poem to one by fellow poet Whimsy~Mimsy called In the snow. Take a look at it here.
In the snow (response poem)
Caressed by snow
Orange shared
Through warming lips
We mimic our passions
Through rolled snow folk
Who will never truly know
A view of you
Angel,
Haloed through frosted glasses
Hidden intentions
Til I feel the warmth
Of your lips
Stephen Kellogg – 2013
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Stephen Kellogg
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OOhh I love it – it meshes so well with mine! ๐ Very nice!!
Awesome! Glad you liked it.. Always a little worried when I write a response poem.
Thanks for the inspiration ๐
Stephen
Feel free anytime! I love doing it – especially with haiku! It’s always an honor. ๐
ahh nice . loved both of them
Thanks!!! Me too ๐
Yummy Stephen ๐ … (how eloquent am I!)
Thanks Rambly… hopefully you were able to read Whimsy’s as well
Peace,
Stephen