Another quick response poem to whimsy~mimsy‘s poem a july evening. Thanks again for another poem inspiring poem.
a july evening (response poem)
I saw you kiss
As you darkened the porch light
Your twisted shadows reaching
Far into my twilight
Where I twinkle my approval
Stephen Kellogg – 2013
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I love your response poems!
Susan,
Thanks again! Mimsy seems to be on a roll and the little images she portrays drop response poems right into my lap / out my finger tips 😀
Peace,
Stephen
Wow. I like this. I’ve been watching the twinkling language of the poems recently and wondering of their thoughts. I needed you to translate.
Alice,
Thanks! I enjoy taking the view from something or somewhere or someone else “in” the poem. In this case I heard the firefly talking and attempted to translate it :D…
Peace,
Stephen
I like how you do this. This inspires me to try the same thing. Those 100 words fictions from several points of view could be very revealing. Thanks. Alice
Alice,
Do try, it’s fun.
Peace,
Stephen
Brilliant response!
Deana,
Thanks … this one was a bit easier to respond to than yours 😉
Peace,
Stephen