When I thought what you knew – Response Poem – NaPoWriMo2013


A quick response poem to whimsy~mimsy‘s poem when you knew what I thought. Go read it, it’s really catches you.

When I thought what you knew – Response Poem

 

You wrote a letter
And I received
Your words, I smiled and sat

You asked, I’m fine
You said you are too
And left blank space for me to use

I sealed my response
Sent it on its way
Pleased you left me room

Your meaning lost
Now filled with me
Alas, too late, now I see

 

Stephen Kellogg – 2013

 

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About Stephen Kellogg

Poetry, Ponderings, Prose, Photos & Pounding out the Pathways All at my blog... I hope you'll take a few minutes to wander around the site. Not all of what you read there will be happy or sad etc. but I trust my writings, photos etc will encourage, touch, inspire or just make you think…. I really appreciate feedback!! Thanks and enjoy Peace! Stephen Kellogg All of my writings, pictures etc are original works, unless otherwise noted, and should be considered copyrighted.
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2 Responses to When I thought what you knew – Response Poem – NaPoWriMo2013

  1. Alice Keys says:

    You do such nice response poems. I read hers first. Yours is a very nice paring with hers.

  2. terrific and a shooting arrow!

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