A quick response poem to whimsy~mimsy‘s poem when you knew what I thought. Go read it, it’s really catches you.
When I thought what you knew – Response Poem
You wrote a letter
And I received
Your words, I smiled and sat
You asked, I’m fine
You said you are too
And left blank space for me to use
I sealed my response
Sent it on its way
Pleased you left me room
Your meaning lost
Now filled with me
Alas, too late, now I see
Stephen Kellogg – 2013
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Stephen Kellogg
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You do such nice response poems. I read hers first. Yours is a very nice paring with hers.
terrific and a shooting arrow!