A quick response poem to whimsy~mimsy‘s poem the window in my living room.
the window in my living room (response poem)
Between us pain, empty double shot glasses
Insulation, protection in an empty space
Lungs, air trapped motionless
I hear your lips moving on the other side
Without seeing what you are actually saying
Stephen Kellogg – 2013
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Very much the other side of this. Quite the spontaneous collaboration! Kudos!!
Whimsy,
Thanks for the inspiration. In fact, I just posted a response to your latest poem 😀
Thanks again,
Stephen
Very nice. Romantic and sad and painful.
Alice,
I hope you took the time to read the original that prompted this poem.
Thanks for the feedback!
Peace,
Stephen
Captivating ~ thank you