the window in my living room (response poem)


A quick response poem to whimsy~mimsy‘s poem the window in my living room.

the window in my living room (response poem)

Between us pain, empty double shot glasses
Insulation, protection in an empty space
Lungs, air trapped motionless
I hear your lips moving on the other side
Without seeing what you are actually saying

Stephen Kellogg – 2013

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Poetry, Ponderings, Prose, Photos & Pounding out the Pathways All at my blog... I hope you'll take a few minutes to wander around the site. Not all of what you read there will be happy or sad etc. but I trust my writings, photos etc will encourage, touch, inspire or just make you think…. I really appreciate feedback!! Thanks and enjoy Peace! Stephen Kellogg All of my writings, pictures etc are original works, unless otherwise noted, and should be considered copyrighted.
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5 Responses to the window in my living room (response poem)

  1. Whimsy Mimsy says:

    Very much the other side of this. Quite the spontaneous collaboration! Kudos!!

  2. Alice Keys says:

    Very nice. Romantic and sad and painful.

  3. Captivating ~ thank you

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